So, There have been so many things that just haven't gone right with Angela's story, but then again there are so many things that just go splendedly... So the hard part is deciding what we're going to do. How many parts are we going to take out of what I have and how much am I supposed to keep. Out of the pieces that I've worked on, I think I know what I wanna keep and I know what I want to happen... And you know I'm kind of suprised as to how much of Angela's original story I'm actually going to keep. Most of the random stuff like Gabriel getting drunk I'm going to pass with, but a lot of what I orginally wrote was good, the later half anyway--the beinging was just horrible.
My only REAL problem is Jessica. Her part of the story now. While Angela is off going to Trael and getting kidnapped by Tobias--what is going to happen there I don't quite know so it will be interesting to find out, I can't have them going to Stewart Falls again even though that was rather fun--Jesse is going to be "swept off her feet" by Airo and Nik she is also going to be kidnapped as well, but by totally different people--mob kind of people who are after something Nik or Airo has--and although I don't believe anything too horrific happens to her she is tramatized by it, as any normal person would be. Jesse also realizes that she can't do everything herself, that she needs friends to bale her out sometimes and that others shoulders are a lot easier to cry on then her own. Angela realizes that things aren't always as pretty as a story book, that the world is a dangerous and cruel place--her bubble is popped.
Another hard part is the meshing of things together. I have a feeling I'm going to have to read over what I had in hopes that the parts of it make sense when I'm meshing it together. . . This could be a long journey that I'm embarking on, not to mention it could possibly be hazardous for my sanity for going back in time.
